Thursday, January 14, 2010

HOLD ME........

Hold me during day and night
Let there not be a chance of escape
Walking with your hand in mine
Never letting me down in life

Hold me when I am asleep
All I dream is you and your's
Keeping pure my body, heart and soul
Breeding serenity all around

Hold me when i lose it all
Offering the strength to gain back
Relaxing with a deep breath
Again prepared to take the test

Hold me when I clear it
Never forgetting you against the virtue
If ever, hold firmer, snatch my breath
You make a count on my pulses after death


  1. dis make me feel of my duvet which is d basic necesity fr me nw dayz... rely gr8 job..... expected mre frm u buddy...!

  2. gud job dear....keep it up...waiting for ur next poem

  3. great rockstar.
    very well done...

  4. i hp ds is js d b'gnng

  5. gr8 yrr....very fine..waiting 4 d next>>>>>

  6. gr8 yaar....
    itz a good start.....